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Sentence Improvement

How sentence-improvement (replace the underlined part) questions work; a method of finding the rule that the underlined phrase breaks; the standard patterns — agreement, tense, comparison, prepositions, redundancy, parallelism, modifiers, conditional and subjunctive forms, conjunction pairs, gerund and infinitive — with wordy-phrase corrections and worked examples.

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Last reviewed 30 Sept 2026 · 7 min read

The question

A sentence improvement question underlines a word or phrase in a sentence and offers four alternatives (a, b, c, d) — where the first option is usually "no improvement" (the same phrase). You choose the option that makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

He is knowing the answer. (a) no improvement (b) knows (c) has known (d) is known

Answer: knows — know is a state verb, not used in the continuous.

Method

FormulaHow to attack it
  1. Read the entire sentence and find the underlined part's job (subject, verb, object, modifier).
  2. Ask what rule could be broken: agreement, tense, preposition, article, parallelism, comparison, redundancy, voice, mood.
  3. Test each option in the full sentence — never in isolation.
  4. Eliminate options that introduce a new error or change the meaning.
  5. If the original is correct, choose "no improvement" (it is the answer about 20–25 % of the time).
  6. Between two grammatical options, choose the shorter, clearer one, unless the longer one is needed for meaning.

Pattern 1 — Agreement and tense

  • The number of accidents have increased. → has (the number → singular).
  • He has been ill since three days. → for three days.
  • The train had left before we reach. → reached (both past).
  • I would have gone if he would have invited me. → had invited.
  • The doctor said that the patient is better. → was (sequence of tenses) — but if it is still true, is is permissible; the exam usually expects was.

Pattern 2 — Prepositions and idioms

  • He is very keen in cricket. → keen on.
  • She prefers tea than coffee. → to.
  • He insisted for an inquiry. → on.
  • We were surprised with his answer. → at.
  • It consists in four parts. → of (made up of).

Pattern 3 — Comparison

  • The climate of Shimla is colder than Delhi. → than that of Delhi.
  • Iron is more useful than any metal. → any other metal.
  • He is as good, if not better than, his brother. → as good as, if not better than, his brother (the first comparison needs its own as).
  • This is the most unique idea. → unique is absolute — a unique idea.
  • He is the more intelligent of the three. → the most intelligent.

Pattern 4 — Redundancy and wordiness

Wordy Better
in spite of the fact that although
due to the fact that because
at this point in time now
in the event that if
in order to to
each and every every
return back return
revert back revert
repeat again repeat
the reason is because the reason is that
more preferable preferable
completely finished finished
final outcome outcome
join together join
new innovation innovation
past history history
free gift gift
close proximity proximity
very unique unique
mutual cooperation cooperation

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